Homages and Promises

When writing This Corner of the Universe, I had lots of fun inserting some homages to significant historical items (and some not so significant).  The first (and certainly most controversial, if you believe Amazon reviews) was the caliber of Anelace’s Kruger mass driver: .762.  Most people interested in military sci-fi probably immediately recognized this as an homage to the AK-47 (caliber 7.62).  If only I had gone with .223 or even .556!  Related to the caliber, the actual manufacturer of the mass driver, Kruger, was taken from the BB gun maker.

Of course, most WWII buffs probably felt a pang of familiarity when they read about the Allison-Turner T-22 drives.  Allison refers to the makers of the original P-51 V-1710 engine.  In No Way to Start a War, larger engines are discussed and I go back to WWII to give a nod to probably the most famous AAA/AT weapon in the entire war.

Another reference made that has either slipped below the radar or readers were happy to suspend their disbelief was the Hoss-Boland effect.  In TCOTU, that effect basically explains why ships have a “top speed.”  The scientists of that effect are nods to Marion Hossa and David Bolland of Chicago’s hockey team although Bolland got traded this summer (salary cap victim).  I should give a shout out to Boston, who played an incredible Finals (and entire playoffs, actually).

To make the title of this blog entry make sense, I should promise something.  Well, I’m not doing that but I will say the edits for NWTSAW are going well.  I updated the book after getting edits from my primary editor and now the book has been handed to the remaining team who will look at the book at the same time.  We are firmly on track for October.  Book Three (The Wrong Side of Space) is going slower with the interruptions from Book Two.  Hopefully this month I can get some solid time in writing more of it.

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An Update on No Way to Start a War

Well, the first edits (beyond my own) to No Way to Start a War will be finished today.  I’ll then get it back and run through all of the editor’s notes and change things as necessary.  That shouldn’t take too long, maybe a week.  Then NWTSAW gets released to three other family/friends who will look at the manuscript concurrently.  The beauty of this system is that one is a perfectionist who will look at absolutely everything, one was an English teacher for 30+ years that will rip my grammar and composition apart, and the last one is just a plain remarkable storyteller that will find flaws in characters/plot lines.  I suspect it will take them a month or so to get through the book and make notes.  I don’t want to rush them through the process because we are still well on-schedule for my target Fall release and more than anything, I want to meet the bar that was set with the excellent editing job done with This Corner of the Universe.

I’m both anxious and excited to get the feedback.  Continue reading

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Warheads and Feedback

First, let me once again thank everyone who took the time to give me a review either on Amazon or Barnes&Noble.  I’m thrilled at the reception to date.  I also want to assure people that I read each review and, of course, any message sent to me from this site.  Probably the most consistent critique I’ve received is the whole chemical/nuclear warhead in space critique.

To start, I want to say it’s a very valid critique.  When I was writing This Corner of the Universe, I was focused on a specific set of goals and intentionally left what type of missiles were being used vague.  It wasn’t a priority to nail that down as much as trying to come up with realistic time/space lag, creating a set of believable/fallible/likeable characters that have plenty of room to grow in a series, creating the skeleton of the universe/political entities, keeping pace with the age of sail theme that I love, etc.  Of course this doesn’t mean that I expected readers (especially sci-fi readers, and I include myself as one) to overlook any of the details.  That’s mostly why I called them Interceptor missiles and left them at that.

In No Way to Start a War, I will try to address in more detail the missile warhead issue.  Continue reading

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