I Have Not Yet Begun To Fight

I presume that nearly everyone who read This Corner of the Universe made the connection of Lieutenant Mike Riedel’s conversation with Heskan about a “wet navy” ship fighting a victorious, insurmountable battle to John Paul Jones’ Bonhomme Richard.  Later, Heskan curses at Blackheart’s captain, “I may sink, but I’ll be damned if I strike.”

Most Americans (and maybe Britons?) are aware of this famous battle but fewer know the details.  The battle was not a single ship combat and took place not on America’s shores, but on the other side of the Atlantic.  Paul’s ship, Bonhomme Richard (which was originally a merchant ship rebuilt as a 42-gun ship by the French and given to the United States), was the flagship of a small squadron including two other 30+ gun vessels.  Her adversary was Serapis (a 50-gun frigate) plus a hired ship, Countess of Scarborough.

Paul was actually on the East side of England and was attempting to attack a merchant convoy protected by Serapis and Countess of Scarborough.  Countess got separated from Serapis (and later surrendered) by Bonhomme’s sister ships.  Bonhomme Richard faced off against Serapis but not without help.  The 36-gun ship, Alliance, sailing with Bonhomme Richard, attempted to assist but due to the proximity of Richard and Serapis, Alliance’s shots did more damage to Paul’s ship than Serapis.  Alliance would return and fire again, once more causing greater damage to Bonhomme Richard than the enemy.  Friendly fire, it seems, has existed for quite some time.

With Richard on fire and sinking, an American officer shouted a surrender to Serapis (the officer believed that Paul had been recently killed).  The British captain asked to confirm that Bonhomme Richard was actually surrendering (Bonhomme Richard’s ensign, the huge flag that flies at the stern of a ship, had been shot away so the traditional method of surrender, lowering the ensign, could not be signaled).  Jones would later say that he replied, “I am determined to make you surrender.”  However, sailors aboard Richard attested that he, in fact, yelled, “I may sink, but I’ll be damned if I strike.”  That is the line that American newspapers ran with.

Interestingly, Bonhomme Richard did sink after the battle but only after Serapis had surrendered (mostly due to Alliance’s sporadic, and inaccurate, fire).  The “I have not yet begun to fight” line was uttered much earlier during a failed pass of Richard trying to grapple Serapis (and is a far less compelling line than the “sink but strike” comment).

In The Wrong Side of Space, I pay homage to a famous World War II quotation uttered (in disgust) by an unlikely hero.

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The Wrong Side of Space – Update

I am very pleased to say that the first draft of The Wrong Side of Space is finally complete!  This has been, by far, the hardest book in the series to write.  A lot of things are going on and plots introduced in the first two books come to fruition.  I want this book to be loaded with action but also loaded with character development.  It’s a real turning point in the series, which I hope each of you will enjoy.

The book clocks in at over 80,000 words (the exact number will depend on editing) and should translate into about 300 pages.  That’s my sweet spot for novels.  Anything more and it seems like fluff, too much less and I don’t feel like I am giving the reader value for money.

So what’s next?  Editing.  Lots and lots of editing.  Opinions on the quality of the story and characters may vary in my reviews but one thing that is relatively undisputed is that my novels are well-edited.  That will continue.  I’ll start with the first pass and clean up the obvious things while also inserting notes that I want my editors’ opinions on.  Then my chief editor (AKA my wife) will go through the book.  After that first, critical review, I go into rewrites on scenes and add/delete scenes that are needed or unneeded.

Then, it’s released to the other wonderful people in my life for more editing and commenting.  A month later, I get the copies back and make more inputs based on their comments.  When finished, I run through the book again by myself.  After that, both my wife and I pass through the book for more quality control.  At least one pass of mine is using an iPad or my Kindle.  Both my wife and I will also make another run using a printed copy because it’s unbelievable what you can pick up looking at the book through different mediums as opposed to just a computer screen.

When all that is done, the book is usually just a week or so from release.  I’ve hit my release dates (or been early) twice now.  I intend to be three for three.  I’ll update this blog with an actual month and day by the end of February.

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TCOTU and NWTSAW Available in Print on Amazon

The print editions of This Corner of the Universe and No Way to Start a War are now available on Amazon.com.   I’m very happy that Amazon put a little discount on my list prices too, driving Book 1 below the $8 mark, and Book 2 is just a little higher.  Here are a couple amateur pix of the end product proofs:

5"x8" matter covers

5″x8″ matter covers

I think the matte covers in person are quite a bit more muted than flash photography shows, but I still prefer them over glossy.

Each book about 3/4" thick

Each book about 3/4″ thick

The books are also available on the Createspace site directly (Book 1 and Book 2), but for individual books I should think Amazon is the better deal on shipping.   Overall, I’m thrilled with the end result and hope to reach more science fiction fans by having print editions.

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